Hey guys,today passed by quite well..
I managed to complete a few poems of my own..
here's a piece of the poem,give it all you've got on this piece,comments,critiques..etc..just say something bout it..it's called
A Vow
when i see that look upon your face..
my heart would pound harder just to replace
the ecstacy of your smile just lingering
its a miracle that i could even say
Your smile,your eyes
the way you gazed into my eyes
the kind of sense that i've been waiting for..
is this the feeling that i've been searching for?
was it you?
silently whispering..
telling me that its love
and repeating these same words
don't stop moving on
even when you're breaking down
just know that i'll always be there for you
holding you tight till you're finally through..
so promise me you won't shed another tear
the pain in your eyes,forgive me my dear..
it will no longer prolong your pain
i'll be right by you,i vow by your name..
guess that's all ive got for today..night guys..
